The Composition is a little wonky, bit too heavy on the right side, especially with that little bit of dark tree above the mans head along with the shadow coming down his back makes it too heavy on that side. However, I do really like feel of it, the sort of story element it has. I keep finding myself making up little stories to go along with the photo and that means it has character. So this might be one of those instances where whats in the photo matters more than how it was done.
Thank you! I'm not shooting much street and this one came up spontaneously, without much calculation. I find myself too shy to photograph people, but I need to do it more in order to overcome it.
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